Beauty Pageant Platform Essays: Conclusions

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""And she is President of her senior class". Your conclusion is the last statement, the last paragraph in your platform statement. And so you want to kind of summarize all of the information that was in your previous platform statement. Not only that, but you want to kind of tie into what you said in your Introduction. So, in the Introduction that I said earlier of Empowering Our Youth For A Better Tomorrow, we talked about how the young lady was rejected by her peers and her family. Well in the conclusion I would put, " A friend came along and helps this young lady or helped me to get through my day. She paid attention to me, she made me special. That helped me improve my attitude and that's why I'm such a grounded person today, and that's why I chose the platform that I chose because someone helped me so I want to helped them". It is important to end with a conclusion on a positive note and to explain that you are ready to take action as a representative of this pageant organization."