How to Critique a Classmate's Paper

Writers often need an outside opinion to help them see deficiencies in their work. Critiquing a paper involves providing constructive criticism so that the writer can improve the quality of his work. If a classmate asks you to critique his writing, closely review each element of his paper. By doing so, you can help him ensure that the paper is free of any errors before it is submitted for a grade.

Instructions

1. Read the paper's introduction and determine whether the opening sentence is effective. The sentence should grab the reader's interest and make her want to read more. If the opening sentence is not effective, suggest ways to improve it.

2. Identify the thesis statement in the introduction. The thesis should be specific, concise and clear. It should state a claim that is supportable by evidence and show how the argument will be presented.

3. Read the body paragraphs' topic sentences and determine if they support the thesis statement. According to college writing guidelines, including those of the University of Maryland University College, the topic sentence of a body paragraph should present an argument that supports the claim made in the thesis statement. Topic sentences are debatable statements that the writer must prove with evidence in the supporting sentences.

4. Analyze the supporting sentences in the body paragraphs to determine if the evidence offered is factual and relevant to the argument presented in the topic sentence. If the evidence is obtained from sources such as websites or books, make sure the sources are authoritative.

5. Examine the paper's conclusion, which should summarize the main points and restate the thesis. If the conclusion is weak, suggest ways to strengthen it. For instance, perhaps the writer could explain the importance of the topic or state a personal opinion regarding the evidence presented.

6. Check the paper for any spelling and grammar errors. The Capital Community College website contains a chart of proofreading correction symbols.

7. Check source citations for accuracy. The writer will likely be using APA or MLA formatting for his citations, and the Purdue Online Writing Lab offers an explanation and examples of both formats.

8. Write an overall critique after reading through the paper and making notes. Point out the paper's strengths as well as any weaknesses.

Tips & Warnings

• Be as encouraging as you can while still providing a thorough critique.

References

• University of Maryland University College: Paragraph Structure
• Purdue Online Writing Lab: Research and Citation Resources
• Capital Community College: Common Proofreading Symbols