How to Rewrite Sherlock Holmes

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Rewrite Sherlock Holmes

This is a story I wrote during creative writing. I was in the 8th grade. The teacher gave me a good grade. I thought that I would share it with you.

Difficulty: Moderately Challenging

Instructions

Step 1

Heath Holmes: Private-Eye
Step 2

Heath Holmes the super detective had over slept, for he had stayed up late last night watching the 10 o'clock news. Apparently this psychopath, who called hiself Duke Nukem had killed a platic surgeon, because he wouldn't operate on him. Duke Nukem, a couple of years ago fell into a pool of toxic waste. He survived but he was turned into an ugly horrible monster, with the power to fry people's brain.
Step 3

Heath Holmes was just about to get out of bed when he heard gunshots, somebody was shooting at the platic surgeons office. Heath Holmes looked out to see who it was. It was Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson, his arch enemy's. Heath Holmes called his partner Willy Watson and they flew to the scene of the crime.
Step 4

The two of them studied the place carefully they found a lot of bullet holes and a dead platic surgeon. Then they turned around and saw, Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson with guns in their hands pointing at Heath Holmes and Willy Watson. "You framed us," said Heath Holmes. "Yes we did, we made it seem like Duke Nukem was doing all of the killing so that they would never look for anyone else, enough talk, are you ready to die?" Then, there came this noise like a sizzling and both Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson fell to the floor. In came Duke Nukem, he had fried their brains, but why? "I need you guys for a case, someone is trying to kill me."

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